Saturday, March 22, 2008
My great day.
I was very badly sick for the past tw0 days and there was no one to give me one glass of water!I came back home on Friday, lied down on my bed with two blanket on me. After one hour, I felt like I can't breathe well, my face is too hot, I said myself, you have no choice and you have to walk to Pharmacy ,buy medicine. Oh, My God! that was the worst part. I could hardly walk Anyway I got sick by one of these forigner virus .Poor my body :( She has to recongnize all these foreing creatures. I'd tempreture around 39C which means it was pretty high and I was in Danger! I called my brother. He said better call to 111. I thanked him .But I preffer to use home remedies first, 5 minutes later I was half naked sitting in bathroom trying to do Pashooye( to give 'a patent' a foot bath) my self, Sorry there is English word for it.Just imagine the scene, half naked old man sitting in the full of water tub, drinking water and peeing at the same time. God! I just love what you 'd created. A direct straight tube from my mouth to my bladder, I love your tactfulness God!You know when you have tempreture you can't sleep well. That night I didn't lock the door, not to help myself to have a better sleeping but to give other people this chance to help me if I passed out suddenly !that wasn't the only problem, I lost my appetite. I can't eat food although I'm very hungry.I felt I was walking in Target to get y medicine, passing through the aile full of food, I really couldn’t look at them, I felt to vomit it up!Finally at 3.am I was successful and I vomited up by the helf of a half plum!You know how difficult it is to cook for yourself when you are sick, taking care of yourself, buying medicine, doing grocery shopping... while you can't even walk.I really admire all other the world. The yare such a patient caring creatures that can't do anything but being nice and helpful wherever you need them:)These are just great.Conclusion,never get sick when you are in foreign language at if it happened use half a plum, sickness soup, not any heavy Iranian food . To be continue
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Hello Bahram! How are you?
Ihave come across your new posting,"The Great Day" and it is very interesting and funny when I read it.
However, there are some things I want to ask and just think about them whether they are useful or not.
Firstly, as a matter of fact you were sick and almost died from that virus, eventhough you got better at the end. The question is, was that a great day for you as the title said or a destructive and a bad day?
One interesting notion I have just discovered from you my friend, is a way to make someone vomit. I promise you if I can't vomit one day, I will ask my wife to get me just half a plum hehehe. Very interesting Bahram.
Love, Poe.
hello Poe
Thank you for your comment about my writing.I have chosen this title
metaphorically.If you remember the short story " A Great day" which has written by Frank Sargeson,he also used metaphor for his title of story.
Moreover, I am very happy that you find out from my writing a good way to solve your problem to vomit.Have a nice day my friend.
bahram
Hulo,
Could I just ask what is your fanfiction based on, because I can't quite make out any references to previous works and have never read a story familiar to yours.
I understand that English is your second language, as it is mine, but I think you have to be careful with the grammar because it does hinder the flow and comprehension of your story. It can be the smallest things like spelling mistakes and even punctuation that can help improve it.
The use of tenses is also uneven at times, where you're going from past tense to present and so it does become confusing because I'm not sure if you're in the action at that moment or re-telling; even though I assume you are narrating a past event.
I think it'd be interesting to see how the story continues, I guess i shan't be expecting anything good happening if your title is meant to be ironic.
hi hk.c
thank you for your comment. As you mentiond English language is my second language.But, it does not cause i make grammer mistakes. You are right I should be more carefull.Moreover,i have to say that when I published my story I underestood that I did not check my spelling.
My fanfiction based on my imagination and my iranian culture.
You can write, but can you cook. how about writting something useful such as publishing some Iranian recipes, because most of us may not like your Governments policies, but we love your food. Be brave and give it a go. I might even post a recipe for and Irish stew. Not that is a prospect to relish. See how you go brother. United we stand and all that jazz.
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